Military writing class enforces fundamentals, results

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  • By Senior Airman Benjamin Gonsier
  • 2nd Bomb Wing Public Affairs
BARKSDALE AIR FORCE BASE, Louisiana --  Twice a month, a military writing class is conducted for young Airmen and NCOs.

During the course, students learn basic bullet-writing for enlisted performance reports, Form 1206 award packages and below-the-zone packages.

"When I read a package, I need to know 'why should I care?'," said Senior Master Sgt. Robert Laufer, course instructor. "I want participants to take what an Airman brings to the fight and be able to effectively communicate that on an EPR or Form 1206."

Laufer discussed errors some supervisors commit, such as asking for bullets days before an awards package or EPR is due, using fluff when writing or laziness.

"Airmen get so caught up in what 'Big Air Force' teaches them to do," said Laufer. "They forget about everything else they did, which is what has the most impact."

Class participants range from seasoned writers wanting to improve their bullet writing to new Airmen looking to educate themselves on the writing process.

"It is good to have a refresher and was helpful in preparation for the new EPR," said Tech. Sgt. Kelly Irvine, 608th Air Operations Center.  "With our EPRs going up to boards now, it is essential to be able to write an EPR that is not career specific, so board members not in your career can understand the impact of an accomplishment."

Because of changes in the EPR system, it is important for newer Airmen to be educated on the EPR process, Irvine added. By writing their own bullets, young Airmen can help their careers by being proactive in the writing process.

Every Airman has an EPR due each year, making it crucial for Airmen and supervisors to take bullet writing seriously.

"You have to take pride and time in what you put down on that paper because your Airman is giving their all throughout that year," said Laufer.

For more information on the military writing class, contact the career assistance advisor at 456-4957.